How is this story? Should I keep going on?

(I just made this up!" Should I continue





Chapter 1 - First day of school





Everyone said that sixth grade changes people, but Kimberly never believed it until sixth grade. The cell phones, the hair, the clothes and the attitude! The only thing Kimberly was looking forward to was the big Field Trip, but she couldn't believe anyone anymore. And then there were the boys. Kimberly use to get freaked out by every single one of them, but this year it seemed as all of them got nicer and probobly more mature. But lets go to the beginning. The first day of school. "MOM! We're going to be late!" Kimberly yelled. "Alright Alright. Lets go." Kimberly and her mother got into the car. As her mom was parking the car Kimberly saw some familiar faces. "Hey Alexa!! Oh my gosh..hey Sondra! Is that Rodger? Oh my gosh it is. Bye mom!" Kimberly shut the door and walked into school. Everyone said hi. "Hey Kim! Um..I think someone wants to talk to you. Look behind you." Kimberly looked back. It was Rodge

How is this story? Should I keep going on?
Ya pretty good. You could be a good auther some day!!! Lol.
Reply:Wow. That's pretty good. Keep going!
Reply:i've never heard that sixth grade changes people but ok lol.


nah, its entertaining though. you should continue
Reply:It depeds what kind of story your writing but from my vewpoint its Good