As I approached my classroom, familiar faces greeted me. Fellow classmates and friends exchanged salutations and laughs. Minutes later the sound of the school bell rang cheerfully. Everyone parted ways and the school day began.
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Familiar faces greeted me as I approached my classroom. Fellow classmates and friends exchanged salutations and laughs. Minutes later, everyone parted ways as the school day began with the cheerful sound of the school bell.
Reply:+++describe how you feel.+++......"Feelings of anticipation filled me as I approached the clasroom. The familiar faces of fellow classmates and close friends greeted me and we exchanged greetings and shared some laughs. Shortly thereafter the schoolbell let out its cheerful call and we all parted ways and the schoolday began."
Reply:As I entered the classroom, familiar faces greeted me. My fellow classmates and friends enjoyed each others company. Suddenly the school bell rang. The whole class suddenly stooped as the school day slowly began.
Reply:Familiar faces greeted me as I approached my classroom, exchanging salutations and laughs. At the sound of the school bell, everyone parted ways and the school day began.
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