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Faces





I see these people again, I see them faces


Some are old friend and some are enemy


Yea’ I have change since the last time around


Old friend see me being my self


And enemy saw my succeed


And it feels alright, I don’t want to loose it


And no one will take it, cause I own it





`I keep on seeing these faces


Familiar faces from the beginning till the end


And somewhere in between


I hope ill see you once again





Ill go down there one day


And I swear’ make me keep my promise


And I don’t feel so good since the rainy day


But I feel so loved yesterday


He aint my main love, babe


Cause I aint searching for no one


And I aint doing nothing wrong


I’m just passing by





And I keep on seeing these faces


Familiar faces from the beginning till the end


And somewhere in between


I hope ill see you once again

Grade this Song! thnks?
Sounds pretty good!!!





I give it a 9/10.....good job.
Reply:i like it
Reply:6/10


A word of advice:





You know that if you've made it up yourself, then you shouldn't waste your creation as now anybody else can correct some of the mistakes and make it as his/her own song and that person could be me as well.
Reply:F.





Songs in English need to have proper grammar. Try again.