How is this poem.............................

From the far east, he came


In clothes torn and worn


Hand hurt, back bent and leg lame


No valuables, did he adorn





A thin old man, he was


Hair uncut and beard unshaved


For as many years as he was


No essence of youth, he saved





A familiar face, he possessed


Of virtue, wit and wisdom within


Jeers followed him, then jests


Being mocked, he did not grin





Held his head high, he did


Though men laughed and leered


Any shame he had, he got rid


To where I was, he neared





To each other, we faced


Ruined and wrinkled face of his


Against mine, we embraced


Couldn't as my reflection, he is

How is this poem.............................
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Did you write it? It is very encouraging and has a good beat. It also has a great message.
Reply:IT'S REALLY GOOD! I could have never written something like that! I'm not trying to sound really cheesy but it was really good!
Reply:Good JOB...i LIKED IT...
Reply:good! you talking about jesus?
Reply:I liked everything with the exception of this one line at the end of the first stanza...





"did he adorn."





It sounds forced... I hate that!
Reply:I love that!!! It was great. Did you write it? If you did, that was really, really good.
Reply:I think its excellent.
Reply:not good
Reply:wow.. cool...
Reply:Keep working on it. You might make it into something with a few more revisions.
Reply:cool sounds great
Reply:boring
Reply:It's ok...sounds like an outcast, coming to accept himself
Reply:Well, honestly, your tempo is off. That is very distracting.
Reply:that was incredible. i really like it alot! and i am a tough critic who wrote it?
Reply:It is very good and I believe the speaker is talking of himself as he looks in a mirror...