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Tenacious “C”


By: Sarah Fletcher


The first time it’s amazing


But by the time you’re through


You feel like you’ve lost a part of you


Yeeeeeeeah


*Bridge*


Tenacious “C” ain’t right for me


As I stumble upon new words


*Chorus*


Feel the wind rushing through my hair


I’m on the chase


To a familiar face


See my life before my eyes


And photos of the man I despise


I heard your voice echoing through the air


If only I could say I don’t care


He’s a place, he’s a face, he’s a verb


But sometimes he feels like more


*Bridge*





*Chorus*


Pima the chords (fast):


Em G D Am Em


*Chorus*


(Use only one strum on each chords, sing slow and soft)


*Bridge*


`Cause I’m on the Chase


And I’m far away





I have chords to it, but it didn't fit in the thing

Rate my song please!?
u r only 12!?!?!!??!!?!?!??!omg.like u totally sound pro.u might wanna try lookin 4 a talent agent.that way,if u sound good,i might hear u on the radio.yeeeeeeeeeeeeah.i sing really good.so if u ever hear of Caroline,u'll no it's me.if u don't mind,i'd also like 2 use some of ur words in my next singing competition.i have to make up a song 4 1 of the parts.i wont use all of ur words or the title.just 2 get me started
Reply:yea thats a great song really it is
Reply:I guess I'm not your target audience because my response is "HUH?" Sorry. The other person said it was good.
Reply:thats good! i mean real good! u should be a pro
Reply:Hey cool song!!!!
Reply:yea thats gay
Reply:This is good. If you want, work on it more and see what happens but overall nice work
Reply:It's pretty good, sure. Your song rhymes a lot and it sounds childish, fix it up, and it will be okay.