Always searching for the lost familiar face
Never finding it in its protective place
Light does not help me in my search full of devastating despair
Dark engulfs me bringing my grief to a peak beyond real repair
Found you are now in the ground with every other sad soul
Lost you are forever now leaving me a godly goal
well what do you think the title should be
I need a title for this poem what do you think?
Maybe....
Losing you ....
Lost face ....
Familiar face ....
My goal ....
Sad soul ....
Your face ....?
Reply:missing you
Reply:"I Found You There"
"Godly Goal"
"Lost Forever'
Awesome work indeed my friend %26lt;3
Reply:keep it simple just go with sumthin like...
Familiar face
Lost face
Unrepaired despair
familiar face in a sea of sad souls
Reply:first love found first love lost
IDK hows that
Reply:i really like how you did it in couplets!
hm.....maybe....
"my despair in finding you"?
or maybe....
"i've found you, then lost you"?
idk...not so great at naming poems unless it repeats a phrase or word...lol
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