Saturday, April 17, 2010

I need a title for this poem what do you think?

Always searching for the lost familiar face


Never finding it in its protective place





Light does not help me in my search full of devastating despair


Dark engulfs me bringing my grief to a peak beyond real repair





Found you are now in the ground with every other sad soul


Lost you are forever now leaving me a godly goal





well what do you think the title should be

I need a title for this poem what do you think?
Maybe....


Losing you ....


Lost face ....


Familiar face ....


My goal ....


Sad soul ....


Your face ....?
Reply:missing you
Reply:"I Found You There"





"Godly Goal"





"Lost Forever'








Awesome work indeed my friend %26lt;3
Reply:keep it simple just go with sumthin like...


Familiar face


Lost face


Unrepaired despair


familiar face in a sea of sad souls
Reply:first love found first love lost





IDK hows that
Reply:i really like how you did it in couplets!


hm.....maybe....


"my despair in finding you"?


or maybe....


"i've found you, then lost you"?


idk...not so great at naming poems unless it repeats a phrase or word...lol


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