i wrote this and i cant finish it, its about confusion.
This lost feeling
no idea where you are
looking closely at familiar faces
always feeling away, so far
it seems to be a friend of mine
this thing called confusion
the ability to understand
mearly an illusion
what's a poor girl to do,
never knowing her way
trying her hardest to comprehend
same struggle everyday
it's this and that,
and that and this
always changing
who says ignorance is bliss?
it's so hard to do it
to always feel so lost
and im stuck...i dont want it MUCH longer, but i'm stuck!!!! please help me, im not asking you to do my homework im asking for the next couple phrases so i can continue it....i'd really appreciate it! best answer will get the points and will make it in my poetry!
I need an ending...help!?
leave it at that. hun its great.. did you do it?
I need to find my way
to stop being so confused
this feeling that makes we weep
will I ever find the light?
I need to get out of this dark cold room
somewhere where I can feel the living inside of me
as I go outside for the first time in a long while
I feel the sun hit my face
as it is I feel it warm up my heart
and I know that nature is where I need to be
Reply:Sorry I can't help you. We nearly have the same avatars.
Reply:bcoz the dress is changing its cost,
i dont want it lost,
i got up next morning,
went for jogging,
n saw a new day beginning
-i know its but i hope i helped
Reply:Stick to what you're doing and keep to three or four stanzas. Once you develope cadence to where you feel comfortable, expand to story telling and longer poetry. You are on the right track.
Good luck
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