Wednesday, April 14, 2010

I need an ending...help!?

i wrote this and i cant finish it, its about confusion.





This lost feeling


no idea where you are


looking closely at familiar faces


always feeling away, so far





it seems to be a friend of mine


this thing called confusion


the ability to understand


mearly an illusion


what's a poor girl to do,


never knowing her way


trying her hardest to comprehend


same struggle everyday





it's this and that,


and that and this


always changing


who says ignorance is bliss?


it's so hard to do it


to always feel so lost








and im stuck...i dont want it MUCH longer, but i'm stuck!!!! please help me, im not asking you to do my homework im asking for the next couple phrases so i can continue it....i'd really appreciate it! best answer will get the points and will make it in my poetry!

I need an ending...help!?
leave it at that. hun its great.. did you do it?





I need to find my way


to stop being so confused


this feeling that makes we weep


will I ever find the light?


I need to get out of this dark cold room


somewhere where I can feel the living inside of me





as I go outside for the first time in a long while


I feel the sun hit my face


as it is I feel it warm up my heart


and I know that nature is where I need to be
Reply:Sorry I can't help you. We nearly have the same avatars.
Reply:bcoz the dress is changing its cost,


i dont want it lost,





i got up next morning,


went for jogging,


n saw a new day beginning





-i know its but i hope i helped
Reply:Stick to what you're doing and keep to three or four stanzas. Once you develope cadence to where you feel comfortable, expand to story telling and longer poetry. You are on the right track.





Good luck


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