Your opinion of a 12 year olds poetry?

My poems:





Fearful Time





The Clock ticks, always going


Never stopping never slowing


Never pauses, doesn't miss a beat


Father time, you cannot cheat





Tick tock, Tick tock


The seconds pass you by


Those precious, little moments


That too soon say goodbye





Every minute, people sit


Waiting their lives away


Sitting, scared and timid


Afraid to seize the day





The Rocking Chair





An old lady sits in her rocking chair


Rocking the day away


Her mind fraying at the ends, ready to tear


Praying someone will visit her today





She longs to see a familiar face, a smile


To make her last few days worthwhile


Her aches and pains she cannot bear


As she rocks in her rocking chair





To the lady's dismay no one shows


No one comes, there's no one to care


As she takes her last breath she knows


All she had left was her rocking chair





Which do you like best?


How could I improve?

Your opinion of a 12 year olds poetry?
You seriously wrote this? Its simply amazing! The only way I would say you could improve is brighten up a little . But other than that I am simply amazed at this poem. Great job!
Reply:I like both there really really good
Reply:both of them are nice. i write poems to and for a 12 year old you are good. im 14 and i think i dont write as good as you
Reply:I like both of them. Maybe u should add more punctuation. I think that about all, they are really great poems.
Reply:I like the first one much better. The second one is good though. Not bad writing for a 12 year old. You got an insight that a lot of adults fail to ever achieve. Keep writing.