WhAt Do YoU tHiNk Of My PoEm?? CoMmEnTs WeLcOmE!?

Hey everyone!!! The poem below is by me! I hope you like and if there was any way that I could improve it!! Thankz for the help!





(no name)





You leave me alone


to practice my guitar


and voice.


You walk be yourself


while I'm sitting alone


practicing for my show.


You see her and go


say hi.


You go out for a coffee.


You drop her off at her


house and kiss goodnight.


While I feel a stab in my


heart.


Midnight ticks when you


come home.


Tomorrow is my show,


but you can't stop thinking


about HER.


The time comes


I'm on stage,


Looking out in the


crowd, trying to find


your familiar face.


I feel tears come


to my eyes,


but fight back.


This means everything


to me and you know it.


But instead your out with


her.


I start playing and feel another


stab in my heart.


When I look up I happen


to spot your face,


your smile starting at


one ear and ending at the other.


I don't smile back.


Once the show is down.


I start to leave,


but you come


with her.


Tears are behind my


eyes ready to escape.


I turn and run

WhAt Do YoU tHiNk Of My PoEm?? CoMmEnTs WeLcOmE!?
Nice prose.
Reply:Its pretty and sad. Btw what do you think of my poem, its the q b4 urs?
Reply:I don't know but here is a poem to make you feel happy.





Born fragile, born sweet,


Into the hands of rings.


Born a monster, born elite.





A monster's fate is his beat,


Hes just begininng to learn instinctive things.


Born fragile, born sweet.





Now knowing secrets of the street,


This young prince has grown horned wings.


Born a monster, born elite.





Siring children is his next feat,


Heirs is what that brings.


Born fragile, born sweet.





He died shameful, he died defeat,


Death brings joy to the valley for it sings.


Born a monster, born elite.





Father dead, repeat, repeat


But 'tis the way of Royalty, but 'tis the way of kings.


Born Fragile,born sweet,


Born a monster, born elite.
Reply:That sounds like a hurt heart that needs to re-think a relationship.
Reply:That is a beautiful poem...... i completely love it.... is it a true story? anyways, you have a gift so persue it!!


YOU GO GIRL!!!

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