Hey everyone!!! The poem below is by me! I hope you like and if there was any way that I could improve it!! Thankz for the help!
(no name)
You leave me alone
to practice my guitar
and voice.
You walk be yourself
while I'm sitting alone
practicing for my show.
You see her and go
say hi.
You go out for a coffee.
You drop her off at her
house and kiss goodnight.
While I feel a stab in my
heart.
Midnight ticks when you
come home.
Tomorrow is my show,
but you can't stop thinking
about HER.
The time comes
I'm on stage,
Looking out in the
crowd, trying to find
your familiar face.
I feel tears come
to my eyes,
but fight back.
This means everything
to me and you know it.
But instead your out with
her.
I start playing and feel another
stab in my heart.
When I look up I happen
to spot your face,
your smile starting at
one ear and ending at the other.
I don't smile back.
Once the show is down.
I start to leave,
but you come
with her.
Tears are behind my
eyes ready to escape.
I turn and run
WhAt Do YoU tHiNk Of My PoEm?? CoMmEnTs WeLcOmE!?
Nice prose.
Reply:Its pretty and sad. Btw what do you think of my poem, its the q b4 urs?
Reply:I don't know but here is a poem to make you feel happy.
Born fragile, born sweet,
Into the hands of rings.
Born a monster, born elite.
A monster's fate is his beat,
Hes just begininng to learn instinctive things.
Born fragile, born sweet.
Now knowing secrets of the street,
This young prince has grown horned wings.
Born a monster, born elite.
Siring children is his next feat,
Heirs is what that brings.
Born fragile, born sweet.
He died shameful, he died defeat,
Death brings joy to the valley for it sings.
Born a monster, born elite.
Father dead, repeat, repeat
But 'tis the way of Royalty, but 'tis the way of kings.
Born Fragile,born sweet,
Born a monster, born elite.
Reply:That sounds like a hurt heart that needs to re-think a relationship.
Reply:That is a beautiful poem...... i completely love it.... is it a true story? anyways, you have a gift so persue it!!
YOU GO GIRL!!!
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