I need an ending...PLEASE help!?

i wrote this and i cant finish it, its about confusion.





This lost feeling


no idea where you are


looking closely at familiar faces


always feeling away, so far





it seems to be a friend of mine


this thing called confusion


the ability to understand


mearly an illusion


what's a poor girl to do,


never knowing her way


trying her hardest to comprehend


same struggle everyday





it's this and that,


and that and this


always changing


who says ignorance is bliss?


it's so hard to do it


to always feel so lost








and im stuck...i dont want it MUCH longer, but i'm stuck!!!! please help me, im not asking you to do my homework im asking for the next couple phrases so i can continue it....i'd really appreciate it! best answer will get the points and will make it in my poetry! it simply needs at least just the two more lines after 'to always feel so lost' i need the one that rhymes, and the one between them...

I need an ending...PLEASE help!?
to always feel so lost


and struggle in miseries most


alienating thoughts................... (you can stop it here or)


and there of quaff the pain


and feel that life is vain!





enough? hope it will be enough...
Reply:hmm.....well what i would maybe do is to end with a single solitary word standing alone (it would be kind of like its own stanza, but just one short word in all capital letters--





such as HELP. or LOST. or something like that--one word that would kind of sum up the entire mood you're trying to convey in the poem)





its a nice poem :] %26amp; good luck! (hope this helps)
Reply:how about a poor girl never knowing her way one time she try hard and know her way by folowing what's inside her.
Reply:Hello. This is my first answer on Yahoo answers so hope you like it.


Here's a thought: how about leaving your poem like this, you dont have to add anything so that it would end! Thats the trick with poems they end when you feel like it, when you feel like your inspiration is "over" for the thoughts you have at the moment. Its a nice poem and leaving it like this it would cause the reader to think about how you felt when you wrote it, it would stay in their thoughts some time or even inspire them to put their thoughts down on paper/pc too.


Its just a thought, hope you like my answer...


Have a wonderfull day


Elanes
Reply:lost and confused


but sometimes i think its not me


the world is at fault.


This time...





i hope you like it...i dont always like to take the blame for things