Tuesday, April 13, 2010

I don't understand this poem that my boyfriend wrote can someone help?

A Poem for Shai











How can I describe in words





the image of you





when as of yet we are still strangers





just two of many momentarily





familiar faces fading





back into the blackness of creation.





Our spirits are star crest





meteoroids spiraling





out from the depths of oblivion





set by the Creator of heaven





earth





on a crash course to a common destination





where happiness and madness coincide;





where passions freely roam.





Unlike the transparent poetry





of mediocre,





self-proclaimed artistic geniuses





I struggle with the probable odds of our attraction;





and in some inconceivable way





you have evolved





from a friend into so much more.





It would seem preposterous





that I should selfishly reach out for only you,





from a crowd of many





but I feel that you could be the one for me.

I don't understand this poem that my boyfriend wrote can someone help?
I think first he saw you as just a friend. Now that has changed. You are on his mind. There were a lot of girls around that he could have been interested in but he can't get you off his mind. He has now come to the realization that you are the one. It is you. It was always you. He just didn't know it until now.
Reply:Well, I went to look back at the previous questions that you posted on here, and it seems to me, like you and your boyfriend were on a little bit of shaky ground for a bit. So I think that this poem


#1 is beautiful


#2 states that the 2 of you have had differences and are getting to know eachother for who you are all over again


and finally


#3 that he does you love you very much





I think it is wonderful that he is able to express himself in such a talented way. Kudos to him
Reply:he saying he doesnt kno u but his attraction to u grose stronger
Reply:it means he loves u
Reply:Seems like he doubt you are the one for him.





Look at the last sentence:





but I feel that you could be the one for me
Reply:from the two of you being strangers to friends to love... good luck!
Reply:first part....he still loves you as if he just met you, then..


middle part...he took acid and is hallucinating.


the last part(that I should selfishly reach out for only you, from a crowd of many), he wants sex from you but thinks that your a well...basically a whore.
Reply:He is saying he loves you soooo much.
Reply:he wants to tell you ahead of time that he's boring


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